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Splash! Splash!
Drip! Drip! Drip!
Open up your umbrellas,
It's raining colours!
Sidewalks glistening and shining,
I can see my purple reflection
Grinning back at me.
Orange leaves clog street drains,
Flooding in fuchsia.
Deep puddles form;
Staining my feet green, blue, violet
As I jump and splash.
I stick out my tongue,
Catching rainbows in my mouth.
Children run outside,
Yellow raincoats, red rubber boots,
Reaching towards a water-filled sky.
The rain touches everything;
Cars and buildings and trees
Become blended in colours,
People everywhere, dancing in the streets,
Black, white, brown, red,
Now magenta, maroon, indigo, orange.
Everyone smiles;
Teeth no longer white.
Colours leak into every corner,
Spreading and spreading.
Oh, milky clouds against pink sky,
Do not part!
Leave the golden sun hidden for now,
Keep raining on us!
My friends will find the deepest puddles
And we will jump and splash,
Until everything is
Rainbow! Rainbow! Rainbow!
©2007-2010 ~joelent
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I... wrote a poem?

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:iconsophieluva:
Looove it! I would love to find one of those deep puddles and drown. Just drown myself in a rainbow! eeek well done mia :)

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Please don't put goldfish in bowls :(

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:iconjoelent:
drowning in rainbow would be the best way to go!:D
thank yooouuuuu:hug:

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:iconsophieluva:
Agreed :)

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Please don't put goldfish in bowls :(

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:iconluna89:
It makes you think of what a child would see while on acid... in a good way!

I'm glad you actually are a person that would use 'fuscia' instead of 'pink' it just makes it more visual and interesting. great job.

This poem is cute and fun.. i'm glad you decided to submit it after it's ilegibility in Page 3.

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"Oh my god, your aura is so beautiful! It's purple, your aura is purple!"
- Almost Famous
:iconjoelent:
child on acid!:giggle: you're hilarious.
thank you for adding it to favourites!:heart:

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:icondejectedjester:
I think you should send this to the Skittles Advertising Commitee.

[I'm just jealous of your skillss].
:iconluna89:
lol, you're welcome:)

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This apple tastes so sweet,
It's too sweet
Now I must
Sleep
:iconjoelent:
and sell out? why, that idea is as crazy as buying brakes from anywhere but Midas!;)

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:iconjoelent:
oh and he favourited it too! :hug:

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